I actually really like the style, the way you drew the figures and the face (though the girl... looks a bit too curvy to be a child maybe?) The red glowy eyes and the whole pied piper thing makes this really spooky and creepy. XD
I cant draw kids at all. I cant draw girls at all. I gave it curves so you could tell it wsa girl. although the dress kind of gives it away. thanks for all the critiques by th way, they are super helpful!
Well I think 2 had a few female companions, I think that along with Jamie though Victoria was the main girl - she was the one that joined them in the five doctors, and I think Sarah Jane didn't meet the Doctor until he was Jon Pertwee (3rd) when he was working with unit and she snuck in pretending to be someone else